Hero is a person who is impressive and to be idol in everyone life. To me ‘My Hero’ in my life is my father because he very important in my world. My father born in Kelantan, his is 8 from 10 siblings. My father work as police traffic. I am very proud with my father work because that job is very adventurous. My father is a responsible person and patient in doing is work because when he works it never feels tired to find income to family. My father sacrifice as my hero is, he is so brave when he doing his job every night and every day. I had seen my father responsibility and dedication when one day my father had save my best friend from an accident in front of the school when she leave the school bus. My friend was injured and she had blood all over her body. My father immediate bought my friends to the nearer hospitals. Other than that, my father always gives attention to myself and my family safety when we go to the public place. Although, I feel restrict with my father attitude but I know what my father do to me he have his own benefit and advantages to my life. My father sacrifice is so big, such as he send me go to school from 6 year old until now to me get the knowledge at the school and to be independent in my life. Although, my father very busy with his job but he still have the time to give attention to my study and to share my problem to him. My father is lovely person, he always persuade me when sulking. My father’s always give advice to me to study hard and get a better result from the my previous result. Those have been my father sacrifice for me. Thus, he’s always being my hero in my life. I love my hero so much.
Friday, January 22, 2010
My Hero
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first of all i can see that you have the ideas to write but you did not provide enough details to the ideas.
ReplyDeletesecondly, your grammar is all over the place. you need to double check next time before you post it on your blog.
third, please avoid from direct translation!
and lastly PLEASE DO NOT COPY PASTE FROM OTHER SOURCES!!!! AND IF POSSIBLE, PLEASE MAKE SURE WHAT EVER YOU WROTE IS BASED ON WHAT YOU HAVE EXPERIENCE!!!